Tuesday, 30 May 2017

Cheeky writing

It’s midnight on Christmas Eve and I am creeping down the corridor about to be caught by my parents just for a dog! If you are wondering how I got in this sticky situation, it all started when I heard a loud noise coming from the living room and it sounded like rustling from our christmas tree. Could it be Santa Claus? Wait just a crazy minute! I think I just heard some barking. Is Lily ( our dog ) there with Santa? Well there's only one way to find out. Here goes.CLIck! Ah h?... What just happened? That's not Santa! That's Lily! What's she doing here? Creak!  No no no no no no no no no no no! That can't be my parents! If they find out that I woke up just for Santa ( p.s who I don't believe in now ) then they will be really mad! What to do, what to do? HIDE! I grab Lily and hid behind the door to see my mum and dad walking down the corridor with presents! I was right! Santa didn't exist! I am so relieved that my parents didn't find out. I should really get back to bed, see ya tomorrow. It's breakfast and mum says that just for once I can open my presents before breakfast! I am really happy! This is what I got: a Fidget Spinner, some putty, art supplies and a book and kit on how to write a amazing story (you even get to publish it yourself with your parents.) Then my dad said “Do you like the presents Santa gave you? ” I said “ I didn't know it was Santa! ” wink.
The end.
My self reflection
I use lots of my bright sparks words but as soon as I write it down I think “Are these the right words to have used?” This means that my brightsparks words are Multistructural. On the other hand my punctuation was Relational because I use many types of punctuation correctly in my writing and I know when and why to use them. My next steps are to teach people who are confused about their punctuation. My next step for using bright sparks words is to use many bright sparks words but connect them.

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